Showing posts with label G. Assignment 6: Screenplays. Show all posts
Showing posts with label G. Assignment 6: Screenplays. Show all posts

Friday, 5 January 2018

GC1: The Commissioning Process and Workings as a Writer; The Journey of a Script

GC1: The Commissioning Process and Workings as a Writer; 
The Journey of a Script


Writer/Producer commissioning is when one is given the task to write/produce a piece of work on the basis they may or may not get payed. There are two ways to pay an author for a story. The first is to pay a royalty on each copy sold once its already written and produced. Usually a non-returnable amount of money is payed up front as an advance then no further money is due to the author until the book has earned that amount in royalties.


The second way is to pay a flat fee before the story is written. This is commissioning a writer. An production company/director would pitch an idea they want written to a well-established reputable writer and once the story is written they can they do as the please with it. They can either decide to scrap it, keep it behind in production and use it at a later date, or produce it straight away. It is out of the writers hands once the flat amount is payed and they will earn no more royalties from the book/screenplay.


There are however many different job roles in the commissioning process of a novel/screenplay. There are the actual production roles such as; writing, producing, directing etc. however commissioning roles also include to jobs in the post production process such as commissioning editors, script editors and agents. Most production companies buy a story/screenplay with the pure intent of making money, however sometimes there are ulterior motives. In 2013, Tom Roberts a multi-award wining film director was approached by The Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation and The Crown Prince of Abu Dhabi (a government agency) with the purpose of creating a film to rally philanthropists together and help eradicate polio from Pakistan. This was released in 2014 and was called 'Every Last Child''.


An independent writer usually works and has to manage time in different methods to most professions. In a typical job a worker will have a set time they have to arrive at location, and a set time they can leave. Whereas for a writer they have to create their own limits. Whether they set their own starting/finishing hours, decide on a set amount of time to spend writing per day or even a set amount of words to reach, a writer has to have good time management and discipline to succeed.

Every writer knows that in the industry you have to be very careful and wary of the legal and ethical aspects of writing, particularly copyright and plagiarism laws. However factors like watersheds and censorship issues also have to be taken into account. In the UK, the BBC has a well established policy of making 9pm the pivotal point of the evening's television. After this time television shows aired will contain a high level of inappropriate content for children. Since 2003 Ofcom has taken action on more than 300 occasions where broadcasters have scheduled unsuitable content before or immediately after the watershed. In a number of cases, inappropriate music videos were shown in the afternoon.

However the most complained happening on television to date was unscripted on reality TV. In 2007 when Jade Goody used racially-motivated slurs in the Big Brother house against follow celebrity contestant Shilpa Shetty a record 44,000 people contacted Ofcom with a further 3,000 contacting channel 4. The show was taken off air for a year and Jade was removed from the series.


Unsuitable content can include everything from sexual content, to graphic violence to swearing. Only offensive and frequent swearing is banned before the watershed.

Commissioning a script can be a long process which requires hard work and patience. New and original work needs to be created to be able to achieve this, as well a passion for writing. There are many commissioning bodies, but making an impression on someone working in the business can really be one way to break into the industry.

BBC Vision:

Where as a commissioning body in terms of screenwriting can be in the form of a company, organisation, corporation etc. that will decide collectively whether a script will be produced or not. One commonly known commissioning body is BBC Vision. They commission scripts based on current needs for their genres and channels. They constantly look for holes in their channels, trying to a target audience that their content is missing. Once they figure out one, they'll scout and commission scripts looking for a only few very specific types of story.

Bluecat Screenplays:

Another example of a commissioning body would be the Bluecat Screenplays competition .  They are a short film competition that has been running since 1998. It gives writers the opportunity to have their film screen in Los Angeles and 1st place winner receives $10,000. There are a lot of guidelines to follow but the some of the most important ones are; all ideas must be original, all entries must be in English, short films must be between 1-50 minutes long and short screenplays must be between 1-49 pages long.

Independent Cinema Office:

The British Independent Cinema Office is a example of a commissioning body organisation. Its a national support organisation founded in 2003 for independent exhibitors of all kinds including cinemas, film festivals and film societies. They offer services such as training independent cinema professionals, distributing films into the UK market place and running events for cinema professionals that is meant to encourage collaboration in the industry.



Job Roles

There are many different job roles that the a script will meet on its journey from paper to production. Here are some examples and what they might involve;

Production Manager

Production managers organize the business finance and employment issues in screenplay/script productions. As a production manager, they are in charge of how the budget is spent and making sure everything runs smoothly in the production of the script. The average salary for a production manager in the UK is £36,000 however salaries can pay up to £48,000.

Executive Producer


The role of the Executive producer is to oversee all the work of the producer on behalf of the studio, the financiers and the distributors. They will ensure the film is completed on time, within the budget, and to agreed artistic and technical standards. Education requirements vary, although a bachelor's degree in film studies/journalism is generally required. The average salary for an Executive Producer in the UK is £86,000.

Commissioning Editor

In publishing, a commissioning editor is essentially a buyer. It is the job of the commissioning editor to advise the production company on which scripts to produce. Usually the decision of whether to actually contract a script is taken by a senior manager rather than the editor, however a commissioning editor can still earn in the region of £20,000 to £40,000.


Image result for quentin tarantinoThe role of a writer during/after production will vary a lot between production companies/writers/contracts etc. Some writers have their script sold and will have no further input on what happens from that point on. However there are writers like Quentin Tarantino who writes all his own screenplays, and then go on to direct and produce them. In my opinion I think this method produces the best films, with the one mind who originally envisioned the scenes onto paper being the one in control.
                                                                                                                                                                                          





Wednesday, 29 November 2017

Screenwriting Research Dossier


Screenwriting Research Dossier

One competition I would enter my short film screenplay into would be the 'Bluecat' screenplay competition. This is a short film competition that has been running since 1998. It gives writers the opportunity to have their film screen in Los Angeles and 1st place winner receives $10,000. There are a lot of guidelines to follow but the some of the most important ones are; all ideas must be original, all entries must be in English, short films must be between 1-50 minutes long and short screenplays must be between 1-49 pages long and for 2018 entry the film must of been produced after January 1st 2016.


Here is my annotated script of reservoir dogs showing my knowledge on the typical conventions of a script:


Here's a page from a pilot episode of a 2015 TV show called Mr Robot. I chose this to talk about development of character.



This script uses a method called 'breaking the fourth wall' to develop the protagonist in the pilot episode of this TV series. To give some context the character, Elliot, is known throughout the series as being very psychotic and unstable. He talks to his 'imaginary friend' in voice overs throughout the series when he is actually addressing the viewer. For example when he blacks out and wakes up after he'll ask in his head "Did you see what happened? I must of passed out". Straight away from the opening scene of the show it uses this to begin to build a picture of characters inner presence. From Elliot talking to his 'imaginary friend' we learn hes lives with psychotic tendencies and how he feels about American society & the world around him. Outer presence and context is little covered in this part of the script other than mentioning his age and what hes wearing, however I wanted to use this example because its so unique in the way it develops inner presence.

Here is my example examining dialogue;


A scene from slightly later on in the episode where Elliot is talking to his psychiatrist. She asks him "what is it about society that disappoints you so much?" and he replies with a series of voice overs whilst a montage of various elements of our society plays simultaneously. This comes together to make a really good scene and I think the dialogue correctly expresses the characters feelings and ideologies on the world.

For my example of good use of scene direction I used Game of Thrones S6xE09 'Battle of The Bastards'. I wanted to use this cause I knew even before reading the script that this large scale would of been really well written. So much is happening at once in the scene, I think the writer has really accurately portrayed how he wanted to scene to play out;



Audience Research:

Looking at the genre, time and setting of the story my primary target audience would be males aged 15-34. Due to it containing themes of violence, gambling and gang related issues I would have to aim for an age 15 certificate. I considered aiming for an 18 certificate but figured if I'm able to tone down some of the themes, having a wider target audience will be beneficial to the film. Looking into it furthermore, being set in the late 1970's in the east end these themes are very reletable to people living in the time/area. So my secondary target audience would be aimed at males 45+, particularly living in the south of England. 'Legend' (2015) is a good example of a film that expressed these themes and was attractive because of them.

Theme/Setting Research:

Wanting to set my story forty years before I was born, I knew I would have to research and look into some video footage of the East End at that time. This short clip on YouTube was very helpful at painting a picture of what that day and age might of looked like;



I think that video was beneficial towards giving me ideas for color schemes and locations I might use. However I then found another short clip which was perfect at showing me the misc-en-scene I would want to go for. Watching this video I took note of the outfits, accents and the food being eaten;


To look at character types, I looked an interview from the 1960's of the Kray Twins talking about a then ongoing court case involving their personally owned club;



Similar Existing Media Texts:

Image result for snatchOne of the biggest influences for the theme/setting comes from work directed by Guy Ritchie, specifically Snatch (2000) and Lock Stock & Two Smoking Barrels (1998). Both coming out and being set in late 90's east end, these type of films are exactly what I have in mind for my story. The unique part of these films are that they're able to have funny well written comedic moments all whilst maintaining their serious story lines and keeping you invested in the drama of the story. Take this clip from Snatch (2000) for an example of this;







Bibliography: 

http://www.bluecatscreenplay.com/
https://www.scribd.com/doc/25164568/Reservoir-Dogs-Screenplay
https://ewedit.files.wordpress.com/2015/11/legend-1.jpg?w=612
http://www.zen134237.zen.co.uk/Mr_Robot_1x01_-_Pilot.pdf
https://m.emmys.com/sites/default/files/Downloads/GameofThronesEP%20609%20-%20Battle%20of%20the%20Bastards%20-%20GOT%20S6.pdf
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i4dzvy1oNuE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_7-cfzV2BuE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1crhwQPKr7w







Friday, 20 October 2017

Finding Your Story

News Story

https://www.thesun.co.uk/news/4717488/plane-smashes-into-two-cars-injuring-five-after-crash-landing-on-busy-street

 Five people were injured but none of their injuries were said to be life-threateningThis is a story posted 19th October about a plane crash landing on a road and smashing into cars in St. Petersburg, Florida. I wouldn't exactly be able to film a plane crash however the idea would to be to pick up after it happened. Inspired by recently watching 'American Made' with Tom Cruise, I would have the main character be a drug smuggling pilot on a run back from South America or where ever. But on the way to his private air strip his plane fails and he crash lands on a street and is consequently hunted by officials.



Media Story:
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A short based off the film and TV series 'Limitless'. A man discovers NZT (a drug that gives you access to 100% of your brain power). It follows on from Limitless season one and everyone has access to the permanent booster (which allows you to take unlimited NZT with no side effects) and Eddie Morra, now president, is hunting down and rounding up everyone taking NZT so he can be the ultimate sole super power in the world. My main character would be unique to the situation because he's immune to the side effects naturally which makes him a target for Eddie Morra. Once he's sees innocent people dying around him, his motivation would be to take down Eddie Morra as president and distribute NZT as a world wide drug.


Personal Story:
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A guy tries take a shot in Vegas with his final $1000. He leaves home to play poker in the high roller casinos and ends up taking the games by storm. His downfall is when the one of the best poker players in the world notices the new guy coming onto his patch, and ultimately has to go on the run to avoid the worlds best poker player and his psycho goons.





Wednesday, 18 October 2017